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poetry. by ~beautifulxchaos:iconbeautifulxchaos:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Sonnet


But i love you

Will you be there when i die
kiss me one final time
catch me when i fall and bleed
would you even wanna cry
while you watch me slowly die
watching as my blooddrips
rolling off my finger tips
drips onto the floor
making puddles
more and more
hearing all my bloody cries
watch tears roll from my eyes
gasping for one final breath
pain swells up in my chest
spreading through my arms and legs
numb
but i can still feel pain
i try to regret nothing
but that is so hard to do
when all i hear is
"but i love you"
©2006-2009 ~beautifulxchaos
:iconbeautifulxchaos:

Author's Comments

well, this is not my poetry, 'twas written by my friend, but she asked me to put it on here. I write poetry, but usually not as dark and gothic as this, lol. I doub anyone goes on here, anyway.

Comments


:iconanithrarith:
~anithrarith Jun 10, 2006, 12:47:39 PM
This is incredible. There is not a word of this that I would have changed, reading it, and that's saying something :D and it's beautifully expressed, and a great topic. Well done!

~anithrarith~

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Three Parts Dead inspired by Three Parts Dead by *DiomedesZX
:icondarkpengi:
~DarkPengi Jun 10, 2006, 2:18:04 PM
Yush, very gothic and dark :D . Your friend is very goot, and very dark. Also, unlike most poems I've read here, most of the words rhimed (that also makes it better). Nice talent! :)

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I'm not weird, I'm just more normal than everyone else.
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98% of teenagers do or has tried drugs. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature.
:iconyourwickedclown:
~YourWickedClown Dec 28, 2006, 6:34:48 PM
Hehe... very descriptive...
Friend deserves a pat on the back for this excellent work!
:iconangelsins:
Mood: Love ~angelsins Jan 4, 2007, 10:08:23 PM
I loves it... and its not very dark... not so much as some I've read, and wrote... heh...
:iconbbear27:
~bbear27 Jan 5, 2007, 4:51:33 AM
I like it its pretty..and it rythmes!

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ITALY =BOOT!!!!
:iconxvampiricxspiritx:
~xvampiricxspiritx Jan 8, 2007, 8:30:11 PM
this is really good poetry..
tell your friend she is an awesome writer..(in my opinion ^^)
but i love this

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:fusionrock:+Memento Mori+
:iconbenymon:
Mood: Wow! ~Benymon Jan 11, 2007, 11:29:32 AM
Very, very beautiful. Please tell her/him that Benymon congratulates her/him.

*Be happy and let be happy*

C.C.Benymon.
:iconwiltedhope:
~WiltedHope Jan 27, 2007, 9:31:54 PM
wow.... this totally puts my gallery to shame... my god this is beautiful.
:iconsillysillychick:
Mood: Love ~sillysillychick Feb 4, 2007, 6:49:27 AM
nice, you friend can write, love the ryhming pattern

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if you says its too much too young
then i'm going to smile and say
even if i get my heart broken
i wouldnt have it any other way.
<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
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